Bloom training programs

Dear friends, A few days ago I posted a question asking if any of you had sample brochures that I could see to promote or advertise a bloom training program. I got no response. So please send me your comments on this attached brochure advertising a potential bloom training seminar in Indonesia.

In my experience writers (or potential writers) from particular language groups have been invited to participate in Bloom workshops so there hasn’t been the need for general advertising such as this. What you have produced looks fine to me. I would only query the first bullet point. Could it be interpreted as meaning there will be literacy training for people not yet literate in their mother tongue? I’m assuming for a Bloom workshop you want participants who can already write their language.